Looks good. Now try it with a pull between the first roll up and the second.
Usually its a sweeping pull that doesn't look like much but you're going to run into loads of trouble in higher winds without. At least in my experience. That is a video that shows it often, along with experimentation.
Keep it up. Wish I could fly as much as you and keep progressing. Just flew for the first time all year for school. Grand total of 5-6 times in 5 years of school. 5 in Chicago, 1 in Cinci. Blah.